Thursday, October 1, 2009

dedicated to some one i love....

Love

What love is?

Is it when I look in your hazel eyes I see myself?

Or is it when you talk

Every word out of your lips makes me high

And the way we just look at each other, I still feel after hours it isn’t enough

And dreams I built with every step I take with you.

The noise and people around us don’t bother me,

I’m just looking at you and everything is like fog around us…

I can’t see anything neither I want to see anything except you!!

I never held anyone’s hand as I did yours..

Is it love then?

Or is it when every touch of yours makes me feel alive

I never knew I may found a person like you

With whom I may walk under sun and talk anything…

Or even just stare

I wish you be happy always

I never think of myself when it comes to anything

I just think of you first.

Sun may rise; people may go to temples to pray

I wait to meet you or see just a glimpse of you..

My heart sinks when I don’t see you or talk to you

Is it love??

I get upset with you and make sure that I don’t talk to you anymore

Then sudden voice of yours to my ears calms me down,

And I get high.

No one can do anything if I am upset

But just a presence of yours I can smile.

Your support makes me strong that I can even stand up in front of this world.

Is it love??

I cry silently if you say something in anger

I know you dint say anything so big which would make me cry

But it’s you and I become soft

So soft that every word of yours touches me within.

When you say you love me

The word love sounds beautiful then ever it did before.

Because every time I look at you, I wonder why you chose me?

My wish is that you stay with me forever,

And we share everything from dawn to dusk.

But if you go, I’ll hold you for while because you are my world

And if you go for once I want to be part of it for the last time…

I wish you always be happy

Love it is

I think.

And this feeling tickles me

And I smile every time without any reason……

Isn’t it a blessing in disguise?

Where you come across with so many feelings at once, it changes you completely.

Love it is

When I lay beside you, every breath you take makes me feel I am at home,

I feel like baby in your strong arms, who want everything out of you.

And I claim it to be, it’s just mine!!

You are mine.

10 comments:

  1. Intense n beautiful write !!
    improve your vocab pall! Max

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  2. never read nethng more true nd pure abt love b4..kudos...u rock girl..!!! cant write nethng lse..don wanna to sound melodramatic...bt itz gud..nice work..!!

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  3. @smooth operator-thnx...and yeah il kp in mind abt ur suggestion..im new n sharin my poems,so il try 2 improve mre on ur suggestion...thnx
    @anish-thnx... :)

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  4. i stand in your shoes today,
    i do feel what u say.

    every heart craves for moments like these,
    wish we were all able to express with such ease.

    well done. and keep writing... :)
    take care

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  5. whose the auther of this poem..?
    really hats off to u.
    i will pay to read this,
    its really impressive .
    never stop writing becoz u have the golden hand of god and u got this only for a reason.

    arun

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  6. love is something , when u feel everything is just so new,
    love is something that works for very few.

    love is a feeliing , a disease that u can never predict,
    love is something that happens only to an addict.

    love is something i really don't know wot it is,
    All i know is that when u are in love, every moment feels like A SWEET KISS!!!!!

    wot u have written is truely pure...and i guess straight from the tongue of ur heart and whenever heart speaks it ozzessss beauty......:-)

    kev...

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  7. @john-thnx a lot..its nice..keep gvn me ur feedbacks :)
    @arun-thanks :)
    @kevin-thanks..its beautiful :)

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  8. so ethereal...your poems led me to a different world...donnw how to put into words...you have painted the feelin with words so vividly... waitin for more dear...
    take care...

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  9. @riya-thnx :) i hope i cn improve mre and write mre beautifully :)

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  10. Its awesome! I dont know anyone else who has written about someone like this :D :D BIG FAN!!

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